Then there was only the roar. The terrible, beautiful roar of the ocean deciding it wanted us back.
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The structure should be narrative. I'll start by completing the title to set the tone: something like "My Wife and I - Shipwrecked on a Desert Island - A Story of Survival, Love, and Learning to Build a Raft." That hints at a journey from crisis to cooperation. Then there was only the roar
The next morning, the sun came out, and we surveyed the damage. The boat was taking on water, and it was clear that we wouldn't be able to save her. We were forced to abandon ship, and make our way to the small life raft that we had on board. This link or copies made by others cannot be deleted